Blood Feud

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Author: 
Liz Merrow
Genres: 
Fiction
Genres: 
Fantasy
Genres: 
Historical fiction
Blood Feud by Liz Merrow

The battle has begun; love is found, loyalties are tested, friendships are on the verge of being destroyed. The Light warriors must find a way to defeat Cade to save Aurora. Anne is a healer and Cahira is an oracle; two things the Light needs to win. Tristan doesn't want to fight, but Cade won't stand for his peaceful ways; Cade controls Tristan in attempt to murder Princess Aurora. Ryndin and Aaron barge in to rescue Aurora, causing Tristan to break Cade's control. Tristan runs away and meets Anne; Light and Dark come together between them …

Editor rating (1-5): 
4
Editor review: 

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is a classic tale of dark vs. light and good vs. evil. The story is one that draws you into the action immediately and you find yourself wanting to read right through to the end. I liked the characters, particularly Tristan whose struggle for peace makes for an interesting read. This is one I would definitely recommend.

Comments

Brilliantly told tale

One of the best of the Genre ive recently read. Keep up the good work.

Not my type of story telling

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The title of this ‘book’ also caught my eye but I could not get pass page 11. The storyline is not very good and the author jumps from one event to another without structure and does not relate important information – when Tristan was forced out of his body
And on page 11 “Aurora stood before him.....and watched him as he jumped into the study and approached her slowly”. I did not read any more.
On the positive side... the author at least tried I would never dare.

Thank you for your criticism.

Thank you for your criticism. I wrote this with a friend in high school, so I really didn't expect it to be wonderful. I'll work on all the negative points. Again, thank you.