Worlds Unseen
When a dying friend shows up at Maggie’s home bearing proof that the 'myths' are reality and that the enemy of the ancient days is coming back - and their only hope of stopping him is in finding the King - Maggie agrees to carry the proof to a scholar who may be able to help her piece together the truth about her world and the secrets of her own past. Chased by shadow creatures bent on destroying them and reclaiming the proof they carry, Maggie, the Gypsy Nicolas Fisher, and the blind seer Virgina Ramsey journey toward truth, destiny, and revelations that will change their lives forever.
‘Worlds Unseen’ is a classic tale of good against evil in a fantasy world. The plot is well structured and the quality of the story telling is matched by a professional level of proof reading which has weeded out spelling errors and clumsy grammar. Overall, Worlds Unseen manages to combine skilful authorship with well-paced story-telling to create a work which should hold its own with the output from better known fantasy authors. Full review here.
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Enjoyable
Maggie is a sweet and sympathetic character- her weak constitution makes the reader fear for her when her past comes back to haunt her in the present. I almost wondered if the Prologue gave too much away. More tension could be created by hinting at history the reader does not know- and we would keep reading to see the mystery revealed. Still, engaging, and with enough reality in it that the fantastical seems just at hand, lurking in the reader's world.
Looking forward to part II
Thomson has weaved a fantastical tale with enough unanswered questions to have us anticipating the second book in this trilogy. Albeit some foibles in the plot, I truly liked the characters in this book.
Laura
Recommended
Thomson weaves several characters' journeys together on this fantasy adventure, though Maggie is the heroine. I enjoyed Thomson's allegorical style. She creates a wonderfully realistic fantasy world. I would have liked to see more development between Maggie and Jerome. Their relationship seemed to happen very quickly. It was a bit difficult to follow all of the characters at first, but once things got going, everything came together in an exciting conclusion.
Novel Teen